Trends, Logistical challenges and Problems of E-commerce in Russia

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indicate that this is an additional pages for the order I have just received.
Existing paper may be and probably SHOULD be rewamped to became briliant, in accordance with supervisors and defence commision advices.
1) I was asked to provide more deep and sophisticated comparison between Russia, China and India (India may have smallest part in it)
2) Maybe to have more examples of Chinese practicies in recommendations.
3) Second Chapter better to divide into 3 chapters, e.g:
a) Literature Reviews
b) Comparison Part
c) Strategic Research (cited, as I was told so)
4) Recommendations should be more detailed and contain some data or forecasts on how exactly it will deal with problems (Recommendations may be more narrow or smth.).
Maybe to point out some capital rising opportunities of Russian e-commerce companies in China, due to rising level of mutual trade agreements and development of it.
(AS AN E.G.)
5) Problems and challenges should be MORE based and interlinked with Data Analysis, Comparison, Literature rewiev parts.
6) Paper may have more coherent and cohesion in it