What does Karl Marx mean when he says “all that is solid melts into air”?
show a good grasp of the Manifesto and do a nice job using quotes to support your claims. But I do not see a thesis. As a result, your line of thought is hard to
follow. You get a bit lost in the details. I would also like to see you simplify your writing. Break down complex ideas. Use short, direct sentences. Concentrate on
topic sentences and logical development.