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first of all im not a native speaker so i dont want a perefect englsih

im gonna upload an essay and attached with my teacher comment on it(inside the file you will find the comments in every mistake)
also will you please read this comment from my teacher and change it in the essay?
((This essay has some potential – in some sections you make good points there are however lots of things to think about:

Why have you included the background? You need to tell the reader – also why have you included the info on the UK, US, SA? Is this to provide some examples or is the whole essay focused on these
countries?

There is s serious lack of reference to other people’s work here especially latter half of the essay and also in the history section. You need to demonstrate your reading by including citations –
this will cost you a lot of marks if you don’t sort it out.

There is little referenced to plethora and differing severity of special educational needs. Most SEN students aren’t in wheelchairs, fro instance I suggest you categorize into mental/ interactional
needs and physical needs. This could help to avoid overgeneralizing

See comment relating to title and introduction at the top of the page.
It’s reasonably well-written – I’ll talk to you about proofreading, check it is all adequately paraphrased.)))