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This paper needs some certain minor adjustments and elaborating. Please edit and revise the highlighted areas i have took note in,
ALSO please make sure to cite PROPERLY.
this is important. There are order of instructions of what is needed in the paper as well. make sure it follows.
THE METHODS: needs some certain minor adjustments please follow instructions. Under results i need 2 more tables for that part. please make some. Please take the comments and revision into consideration.
i also have some helpful papers that you can take a look as well.

