OTHER: This one is pretty good but has a little bit confusing and overdeveloped. In revision, discuss only “improving sleep”, DON’T even mention the other text at all. In the body paragraphs, create two separate arguments. One paragraph explaining how it uses GOOD scientific evidence. Have SEVERAL EXAMPLES to the evidence it uses! Then in a separate paragraph, explain how it is organized. DISCUSS what the SECTIONS are and how breaking it down and presenting it is this order is helpful to our medical students. You have the right idea here, it just isn’t developed as fully as it could be! Thank you so much!