!!! Must have read the book “The Annotated Alice: Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland & Through the Looking-glass.” to do this essay!
Based on the comments I will post here in the requirements and the comments included in the word document itself, edit this paper about the book Alice in Wonderland (the annotated edition, see citation)

Teacher’s Comment:
You have really interesting ideas here, but there is a lot of room for strengthening this into a fully-developed, formal essay.

In particular, I would suggest focusing on:
-Argumentation in the TSs. Many of these paragraphs are missing argumentative TSs in support of the thesis.
-Evidence: Why are you relying on paraphrase instead of including direct quotations? Using the quotations themselves will allow you to provide close-reading analysis, which will more strongly support your argument.
-Analysis. Because there is very little direct evidence in this essay, the analysis is general and circumstantial, rather than specific close-reading analysis.
-Concluding sentences for BPs that show how the paragraph proved its point – and link back to the thesis.

 

 

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